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i am an atom among atoms
i am a byte among bytes
i am letter among words
i am a girl in another world.

i am the girl who doesn't say much
i am the girl who doesn't smile much
i am the girl who doesn't girl much
i am the new girl who never does such.

i was the lens and only lens
i was the brains in many cases
i was the God of all Gods
and that was my holy status.

i am the one who misses home
i was the one who cried in class
i am the one whos always alone
when this ends, home at last.
©2005-2009 ~KamikazeRae
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This is how I feel. Sometimes. In the boarding house.

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:iconreaghhhh:
That is such a pretty poem. I love the format.
The last line really wraps the poem up well.

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I like steak and mushrooms
I like a little cheese
I like skillet sensations
They're back at Applebee's
:iconkamikazerae:
Thank you :) I tried adding in a nice rhyming effect into the stanzas, but I couldn't. Glad you liked it, and glad it actually had 'that' effect on you.

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my gallery [link]
:iconrhev:
I like it! Sounds like something everyone could relate to in one way or another!
Keep it up!
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These things I've said for one reason why, and nobody knows, not even, I.
:iconzaxi-:
Hm... struck by the blues huh?
or thats how the poem sounds like. However, nice poem anywayz! written very nicely, good rythmn ish thing going on too! keep writing!

still think ur GOd tho=p so chi out man!
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*huggles* Its a really heart-felt poem,Rae.It sounds and looks good.Many people can relate to it..

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xx Lady of Sophistication

"What I noticed is this:
I come up with something new..
every single time
that I sit and reminisce."
- Part of the list
:icon11th-hour:
Oh wow this is purely amazing. awesome

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Turn your televison off..and i'll sing a song and if you suddenly have the urge you can sing along

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